I know that you might not be couniting this but I just have to say hat I love the demo and I hope that you are doing well with your classes I know how much stress collage can be.
It's incredibly short, even for a demo, so I'm assuming it's still a work in progress.
I hope that it will become longer over time, so I can play more of it. ^_^
The language is a little bit strange, like a russian trying to speak english without fully grasping the language yet still speaking it well strange, but it's mostly just for Arson, so.... is that intentionally? (It's not bad. Merely a curiosity.)
I like how you have several choices on what to say and do. (I love choices in general --even stupid choices that gets you killed are better than not having those choices.) And this game seems to have a good amount of choices.
I really hope the full game will have both good and bad and neutral endings in it. (And I use the word 'good' loosely here, considering the darker premise, and possibly (hopefully) yandere love interest. I'm not a fan of being trapped forever myself but I know some people love it, while I personally prefer the more manipulative kind of guy, and I don't much care if he's the type to kill anyone who looks at you wrong --or too long. No, I lie, I care in the sense that I like it. lol)
I really like this game tho, and I'm curious about the story behind everything.
I'd love to see this game on Steam someday so I can buy it and add it to my collection there.
If the rest of the game is as interesting as the premise and mini-demo hints at, then it's likely to be a good game. ^_^
thank u!! The language sounds strange because both my native language and the translator's native language are Chinese. This seems unavoidable, haha? But I will consider adding better translation versions in the future!! And this demo has been released for quite some time now, and I realize that it has many shortcomings. I'm glad you still encourage me to do these things. Thanks again.
Ah, yes. That explains it. I recall translating a fanfic from chinese once, and the term "bend like a shrimp" came up. 😂 It is a mysterious language indeed.
If you want my suggestion; Get Grammarly.
I use it to proofread my fanfiction and short stories. It help catch grammatical errors as well as spelling errors, and it's free.
It's not quite a beta reader, but it might help you out a bit.
In fact, the work to which the character mentioned by most people belongs is highly controversial here. If it's a normal role, I don't mind association very much. It may be due to differences in our regions that lead to different ideas, regardless of whether the author is mature or not. I understand every player, and I am not criticizing you harshly. I am just offering some hope based on the facts. No need to argue! Thank you also to the person who spoke up for me, that's exactly what I wanted to say.💕
People are getting so annoyed over it like, I'm sorry, I'm just trying to share something politely that's a common wish in the art community. Being angry & defensive over someone brining awareness to a common theme is kinda crazy asf. I'm only spreading the creator's wishes.
I'm aware that they probably didn't mean to come off rude but I've watched 2 VN devs quit & others just flat out do a whole character rebrand because their ocs kept being compared to other characters. /srs
It may seem like nothing to you but it's actually really hurtful so idrc & I won't stop trying to advocate for it as an artist myself. /lu /nbr
I'm simply making sure that it's common knowledge & so that people understand. If it annoys you, then scroll on. My trying to educate on something simple shouldn't offend you. /gen /nbr
Only 2 people btw. Stay mad, can't imagine being so pissed off at someone that you make 3 separate comments. Take your own advice: https://www.indeed.com Let me know if you need a ride to the interview. Make sure to shower & brush you're teeth, they hate when you stink like a lifeless 4channer. <3
even tho its short i love the art style, music, pacing, text font etc, the game is very easy to get into and ill definitely come back when more updates r released!! :-]
Your painting style is realllyyyyy pretty!!! I'm really like Arson awww he is so cute >333 love yandere!!! >333 the only disadvantage is this demo is too short for me TvT looking forward to the fullllll version!!!!(NSFW hehehe!!!)>>>3
It's a demo, so I didn't think it was going to be very long gameplay; and it wasn't. But now I want more! I like the art, the music is a nice touch. Can't wait to see it's progress!
this was honestly confusing, i feel like theres hidden lore in this game that i have yet to know about, but i enjoyed playing it. tysm for creating this game ^_^
I can't wait for the full game to come out omg <33 good luck with your studies V0dka, I'm super excited to see what you'll come up with for the full game !!
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oh thank u...I really appreciate your understanding. It warms my heart！
I like Arson. ❤️
(I also like how good he looks.)
It's incredibly short, even for a demo, so I'm assuming it's still a work in progress.
I hope that it will become longer over time, so I can play more of it. ^_^
The language is a little bit strange, like a russian trying to speak english without fully grasping the language yet still speaking it well strange, but it's mostly just for Arson, so.... is that intentionally?
(It's not bad. Merely a curiosity.)
I like how you have several choices on what to say and do.
(I love choices in general --even stupid choices that gets you killed are better than not having those choices.)
And this game seems to have a good amount of choices.
I really hope the full game will have both good and bad and neutral endings in it.
(And I use the word 'good' loosely here, considering the darker premise, and possibly (hopefully) yandere love interest. I'm not a fan of being trapped forever myself but I know some people love it, while I personally prefer the more manipulative kind of guy, and I don't much care if he's the type to kill anyone who looks at you wrong --or too long. No, I lie, I care in the sense that I like it. lol)
I really like this game tho, and I'm curious about the story behind everything.
I'd love to see this game on Steam someday so I can buy it and add it to my collection there.
If the rest of the game is as interesting as the premise and mini-demo hints at, then it's likely to be a good game. ^_^
thank u!! The language sounds strange because both my native language and the translator's native language are Chinese. This seems unavoidable, haha? But I will consider adding better translation versions in the future!! And this demo has been released for quite some time now, and I realize that it has many shortcomings. I'm glad you still encourage me to do these things. Thanks again.
Ah, yes. That explains it.
I recall translating a fanfic from chinese once, and the term "bend like a shrimp" came up. 😂
It is a mysterious language indeed.
If you want my suggestion; Get Grammarly.
I use it to proofread my fanfiction and short stories.
It help catch grammatical errors as well as spelling errors, and it's free.
It's not quite a beta reader, but it might help you out a bit.
I'll try!
I love this soo much and i cant wait to buy the full game
In fact, the work to which the character mentioned by most people belongs is highly controversial here. If it's a normal role, I don't mind association very much. It may be due to differences in our regions that lead to different ideas, regardless of whether the author is mature or not. I understand every player, and I am not criticizing you harshly. I am just offering some hope based on the facts. No need to argue! Thank you also to the person who spoke up for me, that's exactly what I wanted to say.💕
I LOVE THE ART AND THE PLOT EVEN THO ITS FINSIH, I CANT WAIT FOR THE FINAL, KUDOS TO YOU AND HAVE A GREAT REST
tysm！😳
I luv this! <3
I'm sure you didn't know but It's rude to compare someone's oc to another character. Please don't do that. /nbr /nm
3 replies over something that doesn't involve you is crazy. Smd & seek therapy. Seems you have some repressed anger, Ann.
real 😓😓 the creator also said it themselves that they didnt like having their own ocs compared to another character
People are getting so annoyed over it like, I'm sorry, I'm just trying to share something politely that's a common wish in the art community. Being angry & defensive over someone brining awareness to a common theme is kinda crazy asf. I'm only spreading the creator's wishes.
The game is fun and has so much potential but the English translation and grammar is 😭😭😭 If you need someone to fix it hmu
I don't quite know how to operate it. But perhaps in the future?🥲
It's rude to compare someone's oc to another character. Please don't do that. /nbr /nm
im sure they didn't mean to be rude. you don't need to go around commenting this.
I'm aware that they probably didn't mean to come off rude but I've watched 2 VN devs quit & others just flat out do a whole character rebrand because their ocs kept being compared to other characters. /srs
It may seem like nothing to you but it's actually really hurtful so idrc & I won't stop trying to advocate for it as an artist myself. /lu /nbr
I'm simply making sure that it's common knowledge & so that people understand. If it annoys you, then scroll on. My trying to educate on something simple shouldn't offend you. /gen /nbr
Only 2 people btw. Stay mad, can't imagine being so pissed off at someone that you make 3 separate comments. Take your own advice: https://www.indeed.com
Let me know if you need a ride to the interview. Make sure to shower & brush you're teeth, they hate when you stink like a lifeless 4channer. <3
even tho its short i love the art style, music, pacing, text font etc, the game is very easy to get into and ill definitely come back when more updates r released!! :-]
I kept play the game again and again,I love it so much!Can't wait 'till for the full game to be released!!! <3
I LIKE THE CONCEPT. I'M WAITING ON MORE, SO EXCITED FOR THE FULL GAME!!
Gotta say, I love his design a bunch. Reminds me of a particular character I have a big phat crush on
Scaramouche mentioned?!
I go not a day without saying his name
I saw it in my files and played it again. Ahhh still patiently waiting
I remember playing this long ago
When will the full game be released?
Your painting style is realllyyyyy pretty!!! I'm really like Arson awww he is so cute >333 love yandere!!! >333 the only disadvantage is this demo is too short for me TvT looking forward to the fullllll version!!!!(NSFW hehehe!!!)>>>3
hello, will there be a translation into Russian
I'm so excited for this! the art is very pretty and the story is interesting! :D
It's a demo, so I didn't think it was going to be very long gameplay; and it wasn't. But now I want more! I like the art, the music is a nice touch. Can't wait to see it's progress!
I already adore the art style of this, I can't wait to see more of it!
Arsons a tad bit silly
Literally played this cuz Arson looks like Scaramouche lol but nice game tho I can't wait for future updates ^
LMAOOO me too, saw it on facebook
huhu by any chance will this be also available in mobile? If so then im excited to play it!! Can't wait wnd good luck vodka!!
Scaramouche is looking kinda different these days :o
Neat game
i literally yelled oyt "IS THAT SCARAMOUCHE.
fr tho :3
this game is cool! the art and the music is on point but i wish the plot would be written more clearly, it quite got be confused
I really want to know more about this game since I'm interested but don't understand a lot. 🙊🙈
Scaramouche IS THAT YOUUUUUU!? hope the full game comes out!!!!! goodluck
This game definitely has potential, but it didn't make sense in terms of the basic foundation of the situation.
Can you add it to Android?
this was honestly confusing, i feel like theres hidden lore in this game that i have yet to know about, but i enjoyed playing it. tysm for creating this game ^_^
IS DAT SCARA?
Thats what I though T-T
Love this!! Looking forward for the full game, goodluck on your studies V0dka!!
I LOVE THISSDS ADHAYGHHHGHHHH
I can't wait for the full game to come out omg <33 good luck with your studies V0dka, I'm super excited to see what you'll come up with for the full game !!
do you know if you guys are gonna come with mobile soon? I’m kinda broke for pc, only thing closest to that is my computer.. O_O
THIS LOOKS SO PRETTY I'm definitely looking forward to the full game
just wondering how do you feel about content like -- 'another person's oc based on the novel'?
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full game when?
He look like scara from genshin impact! :D
Exactly! ! XD